For Writing this term We are working on speeches. To practice being persuasive, we are writing about having longer break times. We had to think about who we are trying to convince (Principal) and come up with 3 reasons why to help persuade her.
Hi Christian, I totally agree with having longer breaks each day. If we have clubs or sports to go to it's annoying having to pack up after only 15 - 20 minutes.
you did a great blog post about why we should have longer break times because you added good reasons for the students plus the teachers too. My class also did persuasive writing, it was based on a add for a newspaper company. You have got a some mistakes in it you should reread what you wrote.
Kia Ora Christian I like How you have presented you're letter I agree we should have a longer break also we could have three breaks what did the principle say bye.
Hi Christian, I totally agree with having longer breaks each day. If we have clubs or sports to go to it's annoying having to pack up after only 15 - 20 minutes.
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ReplyDeleteHi Christian,
ReplyDeleteyou did a great blog post about why we should have longer break times because you added good reasons for the students plus the teachers too.
My class also did persuasive writing, it was based on a add for a newspaper company.
You have got a some mistakes in it you should reread what you wrote.
Kind regards Ian.
Canterbury
Yaldhurst Model School.
Kia Ora Christian I like How you have presented you're letter I agree we should have a longer break also we could have three breaks what did the principle say bye.
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